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Hi Barrett! *is here to review* He cursed the moon for its cowardice too, for it had seemingly decided him not worthy of its light, despite its earlier promises of ...

Hello! I'm here to review your piece. (Obviously xP) Your promises are hollow, they mean nothing anymore. Your promises are hollow: they mean nothing anymore. It’s nearly every other night ...

Hi Twigg! Kara here to review your story! I wish I could tell her that I did love her and that I was sorry, but I don't think I would ...

Hi Windy! I think this should be in fantasy. Just my two cents, of course, but I think it's kind of original. A remake of sorts, right? But anyway, on ...

Hello! I'm here to review. ^^ The place most of us come from, but hardly anybody remembers what it is. The place most of us came from. But hardly anybody ...

Hi! I'm here to review your work! June’s parents called it CIPA, but the doctors preferred the longer term “Congenital Insensitivity to Pain”, she hated it when they said it ...

Hi olivia1987uk! I'm here to review! Nobody told the truth, did they? It sounds a bit awkward. Try "Nobody told the truth, right?" I would have felt that I was ...

Hey! I'm here to critique again. On to the nitpicks! In the middle of the page, there was a note addressed to Ashlynn. Try addressed to her. The way you ...

Hi! Sorry it took so long. So here I am again. Let's start. “Why the sudden interest in apparel?” Try to use a different word for apparel. Clothes, maybe? Just ...

Hi babymagic18! I'm here to review your work. Left me wondering if it will get picked up and put back together again but not by him most definetly not by ...

Hi jasmine12! I'm Kara and I'm going to review your work. I'm mostly a grammar and spelling person, if that's okay with you. The entire classroom erupted with chatter about ...

Hi Aundreaa! I'm Kara, nice to meet you. Oh crap!!!!!!! no no no no no im ginna be late again..... Amber threw on her close grabed her neon green book ...

Hi TheThing! Kara here. I'm going to review your work. Mike slowly let himself down to the cool, damp pavement of the very early morning. Take out very. It slows ...

Hi! Kara here. I'm going to review your work. You may have to build them up for her.” You can take out "up". It slows down the sentence. Prune unnecessary ...

Hi!! Of course I'd like to read. ^^ Thomas said with an air of someone addressing their queen. I think it should be the air instead of an air. I'm ...