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Comments in red. A/N: An idea I'm brainstorming, but have a pretty good idea if its direction. (: This is the start, although I'm not sure if it's more prologue ...

Hey there Biffle. I am crap at poetry, so if this review isn't helpful I'm sorry. xP I like that it's about a criminal, and I like the way you ...

Comments in red. Valentine Hello readers. This is my current project I'm working on. If you don't understand after reading it, this world is in complete night, and nobody feels ...

Comments in red. This is a prologue, but I don't know where it will go, I know its short, but I will add more. If it's a prologue it should ...

You asked me not to do a grammar crit, so I won't. :D I'll just write what I usually put at the end of my other reviews - my overall ...

Comments in red. Authors Note:I have decided to put a halt to both of my stories, I do have a few chapters ready to go though. I'm most likely going ...

Comments in red. A/N: So, here's some fresh meat. I've never done this kind of story before, so it's a bit sketchy. Feedback will be very much appreciated. The name ...

Comments in red. We are the Beasts of the Barrens, though most humans call us “ohmygodaaaaaaahs” EPIC. LOVE IT. XD , for whatever reason. From what we know of human ...

Comments in red. Most people want a genie, correct? Ooh genies. I'm writing about one too. :D Do they want one so they can have three wishes? Well then I ...

I think this is the story so I'll comment on this one. Comments in red. Thanks right here it goes. Max was a brave boy . H e had black ...

Comments in red. Dear diary, Today is a day like no other. Today, fish don’t swim. Today, birds don’t fly. And today, hearts don’t beat. Oh I like this. Today, ...

I didn’t want him to find me. For the umpteenth time, I looked over my shoulder to see if he was following me. Despite the fact that it was too ...

Comments in red. Okay, so this is the prologue to my story. I had the story posted, but I decided to change up the point of view from third-person to ...

Comments in red. Okay I revised and edited so it should be okay now. You all can still critique if you like though... :mrgreen: The Dream Snatcher~ The sky is ...

Comments in red. Note to mods: Capital letters are fully intended in this title. ^_^ Anyway, these are the first three chapters of FREAK. Besides any other comments you have, ...