NovaRose

Um... I don't get it. It sounds really cool though!

I also agree with Crysi. It's like you're falling asleep as you think this or something, so it's really calm and peaceful.

Sweet. I kinda like this poem style- straightforward rather than using metaphors and everything so that people have to guess what you exactly mean. Not my favorite of poems (like ...

Awesome. That sounds like Crysi alright!

Aw, poor guys. Good writing!

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. Ha.

Haha. Don't bother with the rest of it just yet. I plan on redoing Chapters 1-3 (which is all I have besides the Prologue). Thanks for the critiquing, BTW. I ...

Wow, Hunter was right. This is great! Keep on it, Carmina!

It's Ethelbert. I finally decided. Makes sense that Aiden should have a funny french last name like I do, huh? You can call him Bert if you want to give ...

I'm so bad at reading poems. I don't really get it. But it sounds very, uh, poetic. Unlike me lol.

Well, Hunter's dream DID kinda come about in 8th grade, so that makes sense. More than my 11th grade work lol

Ha ha. I'm definitely going to rework the beginning. The whole portal of the Boundless sounds kind of amateur to me now.

Thanks. I've decided to get back to writing, but I need some opinions. How should I proceed? Should I switch over to my Sci-Fi story? Should I just rework Boundless ...

Meh. Not too bad. It hurts my eyes to read the language, but I was expecting it, so... Anyway, it's good to get things like this out of you every ...

Meh, this was pretty much just a freewrite.