Nornadean

The story was great. I just had to look through the story so the beginning would come together because well you did not put more details which made me confused. ...

I like the story it seemed to fit well with the tone. Overall it had great punctuation and vocabulary. It makes sense. the very end had me in suspense. I ...

I love the sound of it so far. sounds like it will be a success. It has a catching name and prologue. I cant wait to read more. I am ...

This one was a good one. It was meaningful, touching and riveting. I loved how you put in good sensory and imagery. It made perfect sense.Its my definition of perfection. ...

This chapter was a tearjerker. It stricken me with pain the further i went into it. I can feel the guilt and hurt she felt for leaving. She must of ...

It was a moving poem about the experience of a poor person. I can definetely relate. It had a beautiful set up with an attractive flow. It was a little ...

I like this story it kind of reminds me of my romance with my soon to be husband. I do believe that if you really love someone you are able ...

It was nicely put in great words. I liked how you made it flow with imagery and beautiful terminology. It almost made me sad. It was formed with great rhythm. ...

This is an alluring piece about a dream where Lilly is caught in between the seasons. The queen of the summer court, Jadine, is sending the dark court into execution. ...

Great job! It gave me the sense of cold feelings and depression. but overall it had a good rhyming scheme. It sounds great the way you made it flow was ...

There were a few grammar errors. I liked the suspense it gave me in the beginning but other than that it was formatted incorrectly, the story was not, in completion, ...

It is a sensible story about a girl who had decided to visit her father but instead visited a good neighbor. This story teaches you the value of love and ...

This was an amazing account of a wolf pack. The vocabulary was copious. However you have made a few mistakes: In the beginning it was hard for me to determine ...

This is the type of story with a catching beginning to keep you in suspense. I especially loved how you used imagery. It created a everlasting image in my mind. ...

The title was especially shall i say catching. the beginning got me hooked though. You worded it correctly, The details were informative, and The vocabulary was beautiful. In all it ...