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It was nicely put in great words. I liked how you made it flow with imagery and beautiful terminology. It almost made me sad. It was formed with great rhythm. The name seemed like the poem is veiled in darkness and it was catching as well. It was an overall perfect piece. I love how you worded it the most.
i dont really understand your poem, but there are some things i definitely like about it...
1.a drop of sugar.
2.i really like the fourth stanza... i can see that there's a lot of emotion in there.
it definitely contains some power, though i cant put my finger on what it is...
i suppose because there are strong concepts bound up.
religion always strikes a cord in a negative piece, because of (in my opinion) people's
natural undercurrents of negativity towards the subject.
another part of that stanza that caught my attention is "why dont you burn what drips from your pen then?"
because ideas revolving writing in a literal sense has always fascinated me.it just... strikes me as very creative, though rationally, it isnt, because so many people write about it.
but... i still love it.