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Very funny! I actually enjoy stories with powers and mutations, and things like that. this story is pretty entertaining and humorous. You gave some good vivid details, and didn't have ...

Very good story! I found the plot was very interesting as well. The details were good and executed just right. This story did have powerful meaning behind it, and you ...

Hi! This poem is very beautiful! I'm just curious to why you put this poem in a paragraph,rather than a stanza. I've been seeing a few poems converted into paragraphs ...

Very good! The meaning of the poem was very deep and well written. I just wonder why you didn't use stanzas. I mean it was ok written in the paragraph, ...

The story is very interesting. Errors: "grips of a dragon for about twelve years ago" sentence fragment "the city of his past live" it's life not live "how did they ...

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! You did an amazing job detailing the story. The only problem was you didn't describe Daigan or Tanner. Other than that the story was very romantic and entertaining. You ...

This poem is excellent! No errors or anything like that, and you used an amazing topic to write about. I actually almost cried, because all those questions you asked, just ...

Very very nice story, and I do think you should enter it in a contest. I loved it!!!!! You did a nice job of describing Fox, but you didn't describe ...

VERY GOOD! I love the idea and plot of the story, and you executed it very well. The only thing I didn't like is throughout the story you used the ...

Review! This was a good story and pretty funny. I just wished you would of made it into a story and in the short description you could of sad it ...

Review! Great story overall. there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes. You also worded some of your sentences incorrectly. You used pretty good detailing too. Also from your main ...

Review! Great job with the writing. You plot and concept was very good and neat. The chapter was kind of short though for a book or novel. You used a ...

Review! First off AMAZING STORY! I can't wait to read more! Ok so your detailing was perfect. I felt like I was actually in the world you described. I don't ...

Review! So, the story didn't really make sense to me and you had a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. Next time you write, make sure you use more detailing ...

Hi Just so you know I like the concept and idea of the story. Next time you write, use more details, better grammer, and spelling. Your stories not bad for ...