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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter One: The Boy Who Saved Me

    Hey there SamanthaNicole1997. I like your story. Although, in my opinion, one topic is stereotyped like the part where 'straight people' tend to put blame to those part of the ...

    Jul 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: The Midas Complex

    That was a good read. A long good read. For the opening, I don't know if this is prologue or what, so here it is: First, I would like to ...

    Jul 8, 2016
  • Other » Humor, Other Re: The life and Death of a Pet Flea.

    The first thing that came to my mind is the question, "How can you be friends with a flea?" But who cares? It really lived up to being a humorous ...

    Jul 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: i don't usually write happy poems, and this is why

    Hey Lylas! Seeing the word "excerpt" at the end made me reread the whole thing so as to feel more of it. And guess what? I really imagined your characters ...

    Jul 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The dream of a song...

    Hello WritingWarrior! Should I say that this piece was somewhat giving me 'feels'? It gives a depressing yet heartwarming feeling while I read. "The song of a thousand melodies blended ...

    Mar 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Politics Re: anchorlines

    Hi Pompadour! Whoah! I would say. That is deep. This is 'deep'. Okay, I won't deny the fact that I had to read it twice to somehow connect with what ...

    Mar 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Elixir

    Hi rhir! First, let me say that it was 'refreshing'. To be honest, I've read a lot of historical reads but few tackle on subjects such as this one. I ...

    Mar 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Power of Serenity - Chapter 1

    Hi EternalRain! You're story caught my attention. Well, I could say that it was pretty 'interesting' in my point-of-view. Although I would say that it was quite short? I guess. ...

    Mar 8, 2015


A person is a fool to become a writer. His only compensation is absolute freedom. He has no master except his own soul, and that, I am sure, is why he does it.
— Roald Dahl