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Re: Chapter One: The Boy Who Saved Me
Hey there SamanthaNicole1997. I like your story. Although, in my opinion, one topic is stereotyped like the part where 'straight people' tend to put blame to those part of the ...
Jul 8, 2016 -
Re: The Midas Complex
That was a good read. A long good read. For the opening, I don't know if this is prologue or what, so here it is: First, I would like to ...
Jul 8, 2016 -
Re: The life and Death of a Pet Flea.
The first thing that came to my mind is the question, "How can you be friends with a flea?" But who cares? It really lived up to being a humorous ...
Jul 8, 2016 -
Re: i don't usually write happy poems, and this is why
Hey Lylas! Seeing the word "excerpt" at the end made me reread the whole thing so as to feel more of it. And guess what? I really imagined your characters ...
Jul 8, 2016 -
Re: The dream of a song...
Hello WritingWarrior! Should I say that this piece was somewhat giving me 'feels'? It gives a depressing yet heartwarming feeling while I read. "The song of a thousand melodies blended ...
Mar 8, 2015 -
Re: anchorlines
Hi Pompadour! Whoah! I would say. That is deep. This is 'deep'. Okay, I won't deny the fact that I had to read it twice to somehow connect with what ...
Mar 8, 2015 -
Re: Elixir
Hi rhir! First, let me say that it was 'refreshing'. To be honest, I've read a lot of historical reads but few tackle on subjects such as this one. I ...
Mar 8, 2015 -
Re: Power of Serenity - Chapter 1
Hi EternalRain! You're story caught my attention. Well, I could say that it was pretty 'interesting' in my point-of-view. Although I would say that it was quite short? I guess. ...
Mar 8, 2015