Noelle

Ugh, Mina is one of those annoying characters that just wouldn't go away xD I love her, but she's seriously causing me some problems. I completely agree with you about ...

That gif though. Princess Diaries

Oh gosh, I didn't finish that sentence, did I? -_- *goes to fix*

She knows who George is, but she was surprised that her brother led her to George. It'll make more sense in the next chapter :) Although when I go back ...

Oh, Raven, you make me laugh ^_^ And the reason I didn't write the fight scene and mention Sam's "aunt" totally wasn't because I had no ideas and had to ...

I totally understand your concern! I've actually been thinking a lot about their relationships lately and there's a lot I'm going to change when I work on my second draft. ...

Gotcha. I'll add that to my list of what to edit. Thanks :)

So the part about the other rooms being empty and all that. I was trying to say that Falyn noticed the other rooms, which were empty, and then saw Akia's ...

though I would kind of like to leave the memories was well written, but for some reason I want to get back to the main story if you know what ...

*fights the urge to give you spoilers* hehe, just kidding. I shall keep the spoilers to myself. Can't promise no spoilers will find their way onto the club wall though... ...

Cool! That helps me understand a lot better :) Thanks!

The curse word.

Gah! I was sure I changed that word >< I'll edit that out. I changed it once I looked over it. Guess it didn't make the final cut.

I totally knew it was Gen's brother and not Ashley's... >.> This is what I get for reading something one day and not reviewing it until the next.

Thank you soooooo much! What you said might've seemed mean to you, but that's exactly what I was looking for. This is an epiphany poem so we were just supposed ...