Noelle

Man! I messed up the quote codes :( I hope it's not that bad. If you have any more questions feel free to PM me! :)

Thanks even though this is basically exactly what sushi said...

*there. Should be hi there, not hi they. Stupid auto correct

Hi there! This is a nice, short chapter that really gives the reader more insight into Aria and Derin's life. There's no action at all, but I like that about ...

Hi there! Yes! I love this ending! I think I'm an evil writer at heart who wants to see their characters suffer. Anyway, this ending is just as good as ...

Thanks for the review! :)

Thanks for taking the time to read through my novel so far! I really appreciate it. To answer your question, no one can belong to more than one tribe. The ...

Thanks for the review! Kyra is a Sagittarius, but they can only sense the tribe that a Zodiac belongs to. Since Melvin is now a Zodiac, all Kyra knows is ...

Thanks for the review! I don't like to reveal too much at one time so more info about the tribes and such will come later. Present tense is definitely weird ...

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it! :)

Thanks for your review! :)

Thanks for the like! :) I agree with you about how chapter length matter. I usually like to keep my chapters around 11 pages too, but this novel is different ...

Thanks so much for another great review! You're comments help a lot! :)

Thanks so much! I'll let you know when the first chapter is up! :)

Thanks for the helpful review! I actually ended the prologue on "fight fire with fire" and then added the last two paragraphs as an afterthought. But I agree with you ...