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Ah, that's why I disagreed with them xD I think Dannel is a good name. It reminds me of the name Daniel, but it's definitely distinct.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for mentioning the time stop. You reminded me of something about it that I had forgotten. You're a life saver :D You'll find out ...

I kinda just snuck Reese in there. We haven't seen him before. When I go back and edit he'll be in earlier on in the story. But we will learn ...

YOU MEAN THERE WAS A PERCY JACKSON FANFICTION FLOATING AROUND THE SITE AND I HAVEN'T READ IT YET?? Sorry for the caps, but like, Percy Jackson is amazing! :D I ...

Ah, I understand about the italics. That's happened to be before. I feel your pain.

I am very fluent in cliff hangers xD Yeah, the first half of the chapter was a bit slow, but it sped up once the guards got back up. Thanks ...

*facepalm* I totally meant to say serial killer. I have no idea where assassin came from...

"Boom 2" pfft haha. I hate auto correct...

asjhdkjeshdei. Falyn and Sam are getting on my nerves. I'm kinda wishing I hadn't have paired them together like that in the first place -_- But no worries, I'm adding ...

Yes, definitely prepare for more books :3 There's too much that this group goes through to fit into just one book.

I know! I'm so proud of myself ^_^

The start of my poetry reviewing career of my friends poems. That's all I'll dare touch in the poetry section xD

xD I understand

Akia isn't actually awake yet. I was trying to describe that the boys were sitting by her, sort of watching out for her, waiting for her to wake up. Guess ...

When Shep and Jay made it to the alleyway, you said Tart was standing over Reyus, his mouth dripping with blood. So I got the image that Tart wasn't really ...