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Hello! Noelle here to review as requested! :) This is a wonderful piece of poetry. I really like the first stanza seeing as it sets the scene well for the ...

Hi there! Comments/Critiques/Suggestions: couldn’t run toward them or away from them ; I just watched. *the part I put in bold sounds awkward to me. I'm trying very hard to ...

Hi there! I enjoyed reading this poem. It flows very well and has great imagery. I always think of poems as a few select, important words. Without the right words, ...

Hi there! I just want to say that I was very intrigued by the title of this poem. And I really liked it. It's got a nice flow to it ...

Hi there! Whoa, this is a really good story! I felt so bad for Madeline at the end. And I definitely wasn't expecting that ending. I knew that Gemma had ...

Hi there! I just stopped by to say that this really interests me. This is a good premise and I can't wait to read more! I was immediately interested by ...

Hi there! I have to say that this is an interesting story. I've read plenty of stories about vampires (although I've never picked up Twilight so if your a fan, ...

Hi there! As Pencil mentioned already, you have a great start to a promising story. This idea is great and I was pulled in from the beginning. Your character is ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. The dew t is frosted on the ground, Trees without leaf cover and surround. The part I put in bold confuses me. ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. I'll break down the review into each month here in the story. September This is a very powerful beginning. I like how ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. Radi jogged ahead with Lucian trailing not far behind; slowing his pace as he secured his sheath to his belt. *this sentence ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. I'll start out by saying that this chapter interested me very much. Even though I haven't read the previous chapters, I feel ...

Hi there! Okay, this chapter was a bit jumpy. It goes from one part to another and each is rather short. But despite that, it was very interesting. I especially ...

Hi there! I've finally gotten around to reviewing your latest chapters. College sucks. Well, not really, but I have boat loads of homework and studying and such. So I barely ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! (finally) Okay, honestly I couldn't find anything in this chapter that I think you should change or make better. I read this ...