Noelle

Hi there! I really hope that this isn't really your life story. It has to be just a story, it just has to be. Anyway, I'm going to think of ...

Hi there! What a cute poem! I'm sorry if I offended you by calling it cute, most people don't like it. But I really do think it's cute! It's written ...

Hi there! Suspenseful ly , he extends his toe and dips the tip gingerly in the clear, still waters that lay below, to mar the surface with a sin. great ...

Hi there! Nice cliffhanger at the end. I think the story built up well until the point where the beast pounces. It's cool how your main character is standing up ...

Hi there! Alright, I'm not sure what this is a fanfiction for, but I'm going to review it anyway. My comments won't be about content so it doesn't really matter ...

Hi there! Alright, here's my review. I like to review poems by commenting on things directly on it. Just letting you know. Look for the comments and such in red ...

Hi there! I'd like to start off by saying that the introductory paragraphs are great. It seems almost like a prologue to a novel, giving us just enough information to ...

Hi there! This is a great follow up from the prologue. After all of the excitement and tension in the prologue, it's nice to have a chapter that's just...chill. You ...

Hi there! I'm very impressed by this story. There is so much emotion in this that I can barely stand it. In a good way, of course. It's almost overwhelming, ...

Hi there! I wanted to start off by saying that this is a very interesting format for a short story. It reminds me of a poem. But hey, everyone has ...

Hi there! Oh my goodness, there is a lot of tension in this. And I love it! :) Your characters are great and I can tell that they're very close. ...

Hi there! Sorry it took me a while to get to this. You know how school is, taking away all YWS time :/ Anyway, I found this very enjoyable. I ...

Hi there! First off, I'd like to say that I enjoyed reading this. I'm really into adventure novels and fantasy is my favorite genre to read so this is perfect ...

Hi there! It's getting late and I'm a little too tired to write a full review, but I'll give you a condensed review for now. First I'd like to say ...

Hi there! First things first, this story is good. I see a lot of potential in it. I think that if you change a few things, rearrange the way you ...