Noelle

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review. Overall I think this is a good story. Even thought it is short, it tells a lot. You did a good ...

Hi there! Noelle here with a Review Day review. I'll start off by saying that this story really intrigued me. I'm not really a fan of mermaids, but my best ...

Hi there! Okay, for a first post I have to say this is really good. I like you're writing style. You kept me interested the whole time despite the fact ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. Let me start off by saying that you didn't disappoint with this chapter. It's a great continuation from the first one. I ...

Hi there! This chapter is so funny. Not in an lol kind of funny, but a funny where I can sit and kinda chuckle to myself as I read. I ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! Sorry it took me a little longer to get here. I've got finals this week and they're stealing all of my spare ...

Hi there! First off, I want to point out that there is a lot of dialogue in this. Dialogue is good, but so is description. When I first started off, ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested :) Here are a few nitpicks: Riley's base was up a tree, nestling nestled in between the higher canopy and the lower ...

Hi there! “Their, darling,” Scott reminded him. *I think it's kind of weird for Scott to be calling this boy 'darling'...maybe you could come up with a different nickname for ...

Hi there! I'll start off with nitpicks and critiques (in the spoiler): But all of the chaos within the protective walls of home, one lone soul was left to battle ...

Hi there! I'm glad you could finally get your piece submitted :-) I really enjoyed reading this. You've got a good solid idea here and I definitely think you can ...

Hi they! I haven't read the other parts you have of this, but I am going to review it anyway. Hopefully wont be missing anything important. "It's Friday night and ...

Hi there! This is the first time I'm writing a review from my tablet so I apologize for any auto correct errors in advance. Okay, so this poem has great ...

Hi there! Interesting telling a story from the perspective of an animal. This really intrigues me and I can't wait to read more of it. Other animals were minding their ...

Hi there! My general comments are in blue and corrections/suggestions are in red . I could feel the darkness Seeping into me. nice opening. I find it very important to ...