Noelle

Hi there! I'm so sorry it took me so long to get here. I've been so busy every since I started working this week. Even right now, I'm writing this ...

Hi there! So, this piece is amazing! No for real, like, amazing. I was completely into it the second you started. You have a great writing style. It's very professional. ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. This is a great piece full of clever banter and funny dialogue. I applaud you for writing such a wonderful story. I ...

Hi there! Whoa, great twist at the end there! I thought maybe there was some crazy thing going on in his head and that he was the only one who ...

Hi there! Okay, first of all the story is good. I'll start with a positive :) The idea is intriguing; this couple sitting at the table, probably like they've done ...

Hi there! I'm so into this story right now. I didn't want to stop reading! I like the idea you've got going here. I personally would've liked to know more ...

Hi there! So...um...well...you've definitely grabbed my attention with this piece. It's a great prologue. I like how you only introduced us to one character. Not a situation, not a setting, ...

Hi there! The man lay in the woods by his home, in a ball clenched to his knees, shivering as his body suffered from being bare to the world . ...

Hi there! I like this poem. It's short and sweet and really gets your point across. Your imagery is really good. I think there's imagery in almost every single line. ...

Hi there! Alright, I'm going to split this review into three parts: one for each chapter and then an overall section. So, here we go! Chapter 1 My fingers lock ...

Hi there! Stay calm Ary, just calm down. He probably went out to go get some food, or something. *since this is her thoughts it should be in italics. Especially ...

Hi there! This chapter is very good. I really like your use of a flashback here to explain what happened during the fight. Sometimes it's overwhelming to describe everything at ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review. I hope you're still working on this piece. I realized after my review that you had posted this back in April. ...

Hi there! Noelle here with a Review Day review. This story is nice. It's very realistic and sort of reminds me of something that would happen in a movie. Your ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review. This story made me laugh. It made me laugh because I could totally see myself doing exactly what John did. I'm ...