Noelle

Hey Myst! I just wanted to say real quick that your writing has improved so much since your first post on the site. I've read every single thing you've posted ...

Hi there! I was really excited to come read this next chapter because the first one caught my attention. So here I am, back for another review. Since this chapter ...

Hi there! Let me start off by saying that this story has got a lot of potential. I really like the idea of this whole chance meeting of a vampire ...

Hi there! Oh gosh, I feel so bad for Payge! I can tell that he really loves Jade and he really doesn't want to see her go. And this whole ...

Hi there! This is a very interesting beginning. I like how you've thrown us into this world and let us assume things by ourselves. Besides the explanation of the different ...

Hi there! I like the idea of this novel. It's interesting how you started out with the definition of the word 'soulmate' and then dove into the possibility that a ...

Hi there! I told myself that I wasn't going to comment on the whole werewolf thing, but I just can't help it. Twilight completely ruined werewolves for me. And I ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Let me start out by saying that I really enjoyed reading this poem. I like the words you used and they ...

Hi there! Back for another Review Day review! What a great ending. Really, I loved every bit of this. The last chapter here ties up all loose ends and makes ...

Hi there! Back for another Review Day review! I like how we get all of our questions answered in this chapter. There were so many things I was wondering about ...

Hi there! I'm here for a Review Day review! Whoa, I love this chapter. There's so much we learn about Jason that I never would've thought about. I thought that ...

Hi there! “If you think I’m going anywhere with you on my own, let alone a house that’s probably empty, you may as well find the nearest brick wall, ram ...

Hi there! Don't you just hate it when YWS messes up all your formatting? It's alright, really, because I can still read this. So here's my review on this. I ...

Hi there! I finally got around to this. You're probably real tired of me apologizing and everything, but I absolutely hate being late for anything and getting things done late ...

Hi there! I finally got around to this review. Sorry for taking this long. I'll try to get to reviewing quicker next chapter...which I see is already out. I apologize ...