Noelle

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I have to say, I really like the way you wrote the prologue. It's quite original. I haven't read very many ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! So everything keeps getting more and more intense, huh? The whole scene where Kacy was trying to eavesdrop on Britney ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! That was one creepy chapter. Everything seemed to be normal, or as normal as can be, until Melanie ended up outside ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! First things first, I noticed that in the first paragraph you use the character's names a lot. That's fine, but it'll ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I really like how you took the time to describe the plane crash in the beginning. I feel like you were ...

Hi there! I'm back for another chapter :) She ambled into the sitting room, and her eyes rested upon the black bag. Did I miss something? What exactly is in ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Sorry I'm late getting to this. It was on my list and then it went poof and disappeared off my list ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Look, I'm all caught up! Woo hoo! Okay, so at the beginning here, Daniel is hesitant to tell his parents ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! I really like this chapter. Do you want to know why? It's because we learn more about Andrew. He's no ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! So I've noticed it's quite important that Andrew isn't marked. I'm still wondering though, what mark is it they're looking for? ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! First off, I'd like to say I adore the way you describe AJ's looks in the beginning! I know that describing ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! “Well that’s a shame,” said Shep, looking at the pile of dust that once had been the dragolinx, “we never really ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! First off, I do believe you meant to call this Chapter 13 instead of Chapter 14 ;) Ugh, why do I ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Oh goodie, the happy reunion! It made me so happy to see the parents being so kind and loving to their ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Hooray, I'm all caught up! :D I really like the description of the meadow. Again, it's just something small, but ...