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Re: Better Things: Chapter 28: Finally, Something Happy.
Hi there! I got here early this time ^_^ I think about this as Emma steers me to my locker at the end of a long, pity-filled day. Just a ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 1: Newcomer
Hi there! As a child in a family that always travels, I must say I was not very thrilled about this trip. Why exactly isn't your MC thrilled about this ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: For Everly: Chapter 2: The First of Many Happy Memories
Hi there! Oh look, yet another novel for me to binge review since I'm behind xD *cracks knuckles* Let's get this party started, shall we? Oh, I really like this! ...
Aug 1, 2014 -
Re: Better Things: Chapter 27: Asteria: Coming Clean (Edited!)
Hi there! Why is it always the driver who gets the smallest injuries in a car wreck?? Not cool. Oh gosh, why'd you have to make us feel so terrible ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Better Things: Chapter 26: Ben Again
Hi there! I'm all caught up! Yay! ^_^ (so I say as I realize you posted another chapter while I'm reviewing this one) Hm...I'm not sure about the first two ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 25: Hospital Humor
Hi there! Yup. The feels are officially broken. Thanks for that. Every time, I fell off after a few seconds, but Asteria would fly down the street, looking downright graceful, ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 24: Bruno's Demise
Hi there! I don't like the title of this chapter. Uh uh, I don't like it one bit. I have a feeling my feels won't last long as I read ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Little Girl
Hi there! Alright, here I am to give you the best review that I can :3 Oh, and who could forget about my workers sleeping on the job, like. a. ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 23: Untitled
Hi there! Ah, so here is where Asteria gets sent away. Why is it that whenever I question something in a review, the question gets answered in the next chapter? ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 22: Fradrian's Closet
Hi there! I just realized I read this chapter forever ago and totally didn't review it >< But none the less, I'm here now! :D its all fun n games ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 10 Part 2
Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! Oh, the sarcasm. I love it! Just a nitpick here: "Who is this they that's going to take my rule?" You ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 10
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Well, honestly I don't have much to say about this chapter. And I mean it this time. It's a bit ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 9 Part 3
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Lekan waited until Obi had left the room, not realizing he was waiting until, alone, he stood and turned off ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 9 Part 2
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! I think this chapter is going well. I know that you said that you're not happy with this chapter, but ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 9
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! "Hello, uncle." Uncle should be capitalized since it's being used as a name here. This is a nice, short chapter. ...
Jul 27, 2014
