Noelle

Hi there! Me again :3 Well, Alexia's powers are definitely interesting. I hadn't expected something like that to happen. Personally, I would've liked to see that exchange of power from ...

Hi there! She only realised how tired she was when she reached the school hallways I think you can expand on this thought. She got home late, sure, but why ...

Hi there! There isn't much for me to say about this chapter. It was well written and I can't find anything that you can improve on, really. And instead of ...

Hi there! I'm here to start catching up on this story :) First off, thoughts should be put in italics. This pops up in the very first sentence. Alexia thinks ...

Hi there! Aw man, that title! You've got me hooked already! ^_^ “Your Majesty,” the soldier said, bowing breathless to the king. I really appreciate the way that you describe ...

Hi there! This chapter was great. Really, I have nothing to say about it. I keep reading certain parts again, searching for something I could tell you, but I have ...

Hi there! I'm all caught up! Not really sure why I fell behind in the first place >< Just a small nitpick here: That’s how Kelly found me when I ...

Hi there! I'm all caught up now! :D That is, until you post the next chapter later close. Qui reached behind his head, and he leaned forward, ready for the ...

Hi there! That scene with the card house made me laugh. I don't know why, but it did. Somehow , he had made a mistake somewhere . You should probably ...

Hi there! These hours in the early morning , after he had finally managed to tear himself out of his nightmares about Valod, the country he would be going to, ...

Hi there! I'm back again. She knew it was dangerous to be angry at Kamaria. I think this is something you could expand. I'm not really sure if Qui means ...

Hi there! Well, I don't have much to say about this chapter. It was written very well, like your other chapters, and really focuses on Qui, seeing as it's written ...

Hi there! I'm already on a roll with catching up on my reviews so I figured I'd swing by your novel to review this chapter! :) You know, you never ...

Hi there! I'm all caught up! :D Oh no, that title doesn't give me the greatest feeling about this chapter. Something's about to go down; I can feel it. Yes! ...

Hi there! I'm back for more! :D Oh, so now we're seeing things from Keed's perspective. Interesting. You know what? I think Keed is my favorite character. I can't really ...