Noelle

Hi there! My hundred, thousand, million, billion influences. Now, this is just a personal preference of mine, but I think you should've just used 'billion' here instead of going through ...

Hi there! I really need to stop being so late with my reviews... This is a rather small thing, but I'll mention it all the same. I feel like you ...

Hi there! Mason spoke, standing behind Tally, pressing a blade to her throat. This may just be a personal preference, but I feel like this sentence doesn't flow very well. ...

Hi there! About time I got to this review... I have good excuses He longed for the moment he’s going to work alone. One little nitpick here for you. This ...

Hi there! One major thing I notice here is that the first part of the prologue is in past tense while the second part is in present tense. While this ...

Hi there! "Peeta!!" "Peeta!!" Katniss Everdeen stumbled through the maze of corridors. First of all, I think this is a strong opening sentence. You've brought us in in the middle ...

Hi there! I saw this chapter in the Green Room and I figured I'd check it out. I went back and read the first chapters so I'm all caught up. ...

Hi there! I'm so late getting to this! I apologize. I have to admit, I'm a bit confused by the last sentence of this chapter. Is that a general statement ...

Hi there! My name is Rebecca Grace Parker and I watched my family die five years ago. I was ten then. I’m fifteen now. Well, you've definitely grabbed my interest! ...

Hi there! I found a lot of your chapters posted in the Green Room so I figured I'd come check out the novel so I can get to the others! ...

Hi there! I have to say, I really am quite enjoying reading your novel. It just keeps getting better as I read on. Not to mention I always look forward ...

Hi there! This is the future, and its now 3025. First things first, it doesn't really make much sense for your character to say that it's the future. You're writing ...

Hi there! You've got people who would rather eat their socks than be your partner in that science fair project that you must have a partner in or else you ...

Hi there! I know it's taken me a while to get here, but I'm here to review your second chapter! :D ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Time is what stops history from happening at ...

Hi there! I saw this chapter in the Green Room so I figured I'd take a look at it! I have read your previous chapters so I'm all caught up ...