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Re: The Beginning of the Future
Hi there guys! I keep thinking that your MC is Percy Jackson -_- I've read too many books of that series. First off, I love your title! It's a bit ...
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: t5
Hi there! I came across Chapter 1 of your novel and saw that I should read the prologue. So here I am! :) I can't even be called a girl, ...
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God-Chapter three
Hi there! I made sure this one was the real chapter and not one you had rewritten since posting like the last one -_- I'm so unobservant. The April sun ...
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 27.
Hi there! I just completely drained all my energy writing that other review. So of course I decided to stop by and give you a review. Sorry if it's bad ...
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: Autotonomy and Apoptosis
Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. Sorry this review is a bit late. Life and all that, ya know? This is going to be a long review, just ...
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 10
Hi there! It's been so long since I reviewed one of your chapters. I apologize. But I'm back now to start catching up! :) But he felt she was... different. ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 24
Hi there! First off, Cabot and Fleta reacted perfectly to being in Chicago. I haven't been in their position before (obviously), but I can kind of relate to it. I ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: I'm Afraid
Hi there! Since this is obviously such an internal poem, and way too specific to be a random topic, I'm just going to analyze it. Basically just point out stuff ...
Sep 30, 2014 -
Re: Crushes Can Crush You
Hi there! Here's a quick flyby of your poem (basically where I share my understanding of what's going on): the speaker is talking about everything that goes wrong when a ...
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 26.
Hi there! NOOOOOOOOO! *cries* That scene though. Poor Dylan :( Congratulations. You have officially broken my feels. They're gone. All of them! You killed them! Ahem. Right... Death scenes are ...
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 2.2 Boy
Hi there! I have decided to stop slacking on my reviews! xD Just kidding. I finally found time to get around to reviewing again. So I'm feeling in the nitpicky ...
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: Trying Chapter 4.2
Hi there! I'm finally back to review another chapter! It's about time... This is going to be a pretty lame review, I'm already calling it. I think it's 'cause my ...
Sep 23, 2014 -
Re: old.
Hi there! I'm so glad you decided to stay with this story even after a year had gone by! I know that it can be hard to go back to ...
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: Darkness Awakening-Prologue (Revised)
Hi there! “Come on Myzair. We’re going to be late.” A woman ushered a little boy. “But mother, what is it?” He replied, running to catch up. Okay, a few ...
Sep 17, 2014 -
Re: A Field of Gold and Red
Hi there! It goes for a quarter mile Does it go for a quarter mile or about a quarter mile. There's a huge difference between the two. No one cane ...
Sep 17, 2014
