Noelle

Hi there! I haven't read any of the previous chapters, so feel free to ignore any of my ignorance. I just want to help you out so your lovely piece ...

Hi there! I'm doing my best to start catching up on novels again. Expect some more reviews from me ^_^ My horse moves, anxious to run, and I rub his ...

Hi there! The first thing I notice is the break at the beginning. I went back to remind myself where you cut off in the first part and there doesn't ...

Hi there! As I already told you like, eight million times I'm so excited that you're writing this again! You've been torturing me with Carsten's imminent death for too long ...

Hi there! Noelle here to finally review as requested. I did read through the first chapter so I would understand what's going on. Otherwise I'd be so lost and do ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. I'm feeling a bit harsh today so beware :3 Although my harsh is probably tame compared to everyone else's harsh... The first ...

Hi there! Gosh it's been so long. Don't mind me. I've promised myself that I'm going to get back to reviewing more consistently. Gee, have you heard that one before? ...

Hi there! Short works are always fun to write. At least I think so. There's so much you can pack into so little words to create a lasting impression. You've ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. Sorry it took me so long to get to this. The one thing that I feel is missing from this poem is ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. First off, your prologue is most definitely not irrelevant because you wrote it. If it was it wouldn't exist ;) I read ...

Hi there! I'm here to rescue your piece from the clutches of the Green Room. I also haven't read any previous parts so feel free to ignore my ignorance if ...

Hi there! I'm not all too fond of the whole "meanwhile this was happening" thing. My 11th grade English teacher always told us always to make sure we give our ...

Hi there! I absolutely love the first three paragraphs of this chapter. Writing in first person is always a tough balance between narration and stream of consciousness from the main ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. You've already got so many good reviews here. So since I'm too lazy to read through them all, I'm just going to ...

Hi there! I'm here to save your piece from the clutches of the Green Room ^_^ I really only have a few general comments to make. I haven't read the ...