Noelle

Hi there! First off I want to say that this was a very depressing piece. Not that that's a bad thing. I understand this is about cancer patients, but I ...

Hi there! This is a great start. I really enjoyed reading it. It was well written and definitely caught my attention. Good job! If you want to know whether or ...

Hi there! This was a great story. I enjoyed the fact that you jumped from one topic to another based off of what was said at the end of the ...

Hi there! This is a great piece! I really enjoyed it. You did a great job with displaying the emotions one feels when they have writers block. I feel the ...

Hi there! Now, I know this is based off a true story so it must be very important to you. It was a good read and very well written. The ...

Hi there! This was a good piece and I enjoyed reading it! It flows well. There aren't any spelling or grammer mistakes I can find. There was really only one ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS and congrats on your first post! This is a good start and it seems like it will be an interesting novel. You developed Thom very ...

Hi there! This is such a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it! It had great imagery and I could feel the passion in it. I like the overall idea ...

Hi there! This is a really great poem especially since you said you weren't much of a poet. There was a great amount of imagery and passion in this. You ...

Hi there! This is a great start. There is a lot of great imagery in this. However, I feel like in each stanza you took a sentence and randomly split ...

Hi there! This is good. It is very interesting and kept me reading through the whole thing. I like how you had Katie name the voice. I think that's cute ...

Hi there! This poem is great. It's very well written and has so much great emotion in it. I don't have anything bad to say, so I figured I'd point ...

Hi there! This is really powerful stuff. It was written very well. I couldn't find any spelling or grammer mistakes, so you're good with that. This poem flows really well ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this. It was quite good and I think the grammer was perfect. This flowed very well and was a good read. Who will remember us? ...

Hi there! This is a great piece. I enjoyed reading it! It was very well written and I couldn't find any spelling or grammer mistakes. I realy wish you would ...