Noelle

Hi there! This is a great start. Your description is good and I can't find any spelling or grammer errors. The emotion you put into this is just incredible. It ...

Hi there! I liked this piece a lot. You put a lot of emotion into it and it definitely paid off. Your descriptions are great and you did a good ...

Hi there! First off I just want to say that for a spur of the moment piece, it is very good. It flows well and I couldn't find any grammar ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS. I would like to say that this was a good piece. Although I do agree with Pricelss. I think it's a bit plain. To spice ...

Hi there! I really loved this poem! It's a great topic to be writing about and I totally agree with everything you've written. You have great imagery and you really ...

Hi there! Wow, this was really great! It was very interesting and kept me reading. I like how you got inside your character's head and told us what she was ...

Hi there! What if I ran away? Never looked back and kept running forward , until I was out of breath If you read through this stanza again, it sounds ...

Hi there! Morgan Grae was like any other boy in the sprawling city of Abalon, spending his days doing ordinary things ordinary children do, running, hiding, exploring. But little did ...

Hi there! I long for the smell of home, for the autumn breeze to rustle my hair. great imagery here To sit for a day and just watch, as the ...

Hi there! This is really good. It flows well and the chorus is amazing! I love it. You rhyme scheme is a little sporatic here though. The first stanza has ...

Hi there! I lost my heart in a storm, what was the storm like? Describe it to us. the one I trust just lost it all, now their should be ...

Hi there! (Verse 1) When we first met (First met) I didn't even know your name yet (Name yet) I tried figure out every chance I got Who is that ...

Hi there! This is a good poem. I understand the message you are trying to get through and you describe it very well. I think your lines are a little ...

Hi there! This piece was very interesting. I like the story. But I agree with Boolovesyou , you really should've shown us the story instead of telling us the story. ...

Hi there! I really like this poem. It's written very well, no grammer or spelling mistakes. I can tell you put some time into this, making it better. It flows ...