Noelle

Hi there! This poem was okay. I get what you're trying to say here, but I don't feel anything after reading this. I like the poems that can really draw ...

Hi there! I like this beginning. It's interesting and it leaves me wondering what is going on. How did she die? Will Derrick be able to get over it? Can ...

Hi there! I really liked this chapter. You did a good job with the dialogue, keeping it simple and realistic. I can imagine this path they're taking easily because of ...

Hi there! Sorry it took so long for me to review. I haven't had much time to get on. Anyway, onto the review... Twinkle covered all of the grammar/spelling mistakes ...

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested. Whoa. So I was listening to this song and the lyrics went "left the secret at the grave" and write then I ...

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested. I wanted to start out by letting you know that this was very well written. I know you said that english isn't ...

Hi there! whorling across the jut of my waist *did you mean 'whirling'? I once chose to wear a mask, but it was a pitiful masquerade, and in the end ...

Hi there! I must say, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. You had me hooked from the beginning and kept me interested through the entire piece. I'm really into action stuff ...

Hi there! Comments/Suggestion/Critiques: *I'm really not sure how to explain this so I'm going to try my best: “I am so excited! And nervous! Can you believe we will be ...

Hi there! Oh my gosh, I'm so into this! I mean, I really love to read fantasy and action stuff, but I have a soft spot when it comes to ...

Hi there! This is a very interesting chapter. I like fantasy stuff so I was immediately drawn in. I hadn't expected the demons though, so kudos to you, taking me ...

Hi there! This is very interesting. I was drawn in from the beginning. I like how you wrote this in first person. It really helps the reader get inside the ...

Hi there! Leno’s ears were awake long before his eyes opened *honestly, this sentence bothers me. Ears can't really be awake. They can be working though, when nothing else is. ...

Hi there! I really like your description in this, especially in the beginning when you were introducing the machine. I got a great visual from that. I absolutely love reading ...

Hi there! Sorry it took me a few days to get to this. I've been busy. Comments/Suggestions/Critiques: Then I wouldn’t be able to then pay up the tab then Where ...