NoStoryTime

I really enjoyed reading chapter 2 of your story. I am definitely going to follow you so I can read the novel. Firstly though, I think this story is lacking ...

This poem is definitely one I cannot comprehend. The whole thing is confusing and all over the place. First of all, you put periods at the end of sentences and ...

This piece was very intriguing. I was hooked almost the whole time. The description and the amount of detail you put, were very lively and really brought my imagination to ...

This a breath-taking introduction. The title doesn't really go with this piece though. I get that it is just an introduction, but isn't the introduction supposed to give a description ...

The story as a whole was very in-depth and a very intriguing read. I couldn't look away the entire time I was reading. Although I loved the piece, I do ...

This poem really captured me and brought me in. The way you wrote it, really draws in a reader. The amount that you put into this is really quite alluring. ...

This poem made me feel and think quite a bit. It made me fee a great deal also. The way you put each part of the poem into their own ...

Personally, I like the message you are conveying. It shows that gender doesn't decide someone's favorite color. Though I liked the message, I feel as though this piece should be ...

So first of all, I do not understand the transition between the first paragraph and the fourth. I.E. "It had been a long day" and "What happened was,". When I ...

This poem was very descriptive. I felt the regret alongside your character the entire time, until the end of course. The ending made me laugh. Reading this poem and having ...

From the start, your writing captured me and seem to imprison me. Right after "I trusted you!", I became not as hooked though. Before "I trusted you!", everything you were ...