Young Writers Society

Hey pineapple! I wanted to review this a couple of days ago, but I had this huge project due and stuff, so I had to hesitantly put it aside. Anyways, ...

Hey emilyrebecca! First of all, I think you have found a really great concept for this poem. The whole "mature child" thing is kind of messed up. I was really ...

Hey Euphoria! First of all, I have to say that this poem has a really intriguing title. As someone who used to be completely obsessed with zodiac signs and stuff, ...

Hey Book_Dragon! I saw this in the Green Room a couple of days ago, and I wanted to read it but then I had work, and then I forgot about ...

Hey Plume! If this isn't in the literary spotlight already, it totally should be! This is an amazing poem! I like the format of the poem, how you end each ...

This is kind of random, but are you by any chance a Percy Jackson fan? Because the way you describe the death of a god kind of reminds me of ...

First of all, lemme just say I love your formatting! It looks SOO COOL!! I've heard of poets that paint pictures with their words, but your poem is like a ...

Hey Haraya! You've done it again! You've written a beautiful masterpiece out of a topic that nobody would even consider. And, you've done an awesome job! Way to go! You've ...

Hey Haraya! First of all, lemme just say, you have this beautiful way with words, which is just so poetical!! I know that sounds kind of dumb, 'cause like, this ...

Hey! I've been waiting for so looong for this, and when I saw this in the Green Room, I started to grin from ear to ear like an idiot. (: ...

Hey chikara! First of all, I really liked the comparison of love and coffee. The entire poem flows smoothly like a river, gently bringing about images in the readers' mind ...

Hey ThikiNiki! Wow! This is is a great poem. It really made me laugh, with its light-hearted tone. I especially loved this line: Not superior to a single thing. Simply ...

Hey! First of all, lemme just say you have done an awesome job with this poem. You have a captivating title, that is both intriguing and touching. I liked how ...

Hey! Your author's note is waaaay too modest! This poem was awesome! There is no awfulness at all! I really liked how you passed on a sweet message through your ...

Hey chikara! First of all, wow! I really like how you relate origami to heartbreak. The title is great. It is intriguing, and touching. This line is beautiful: origami unfolding ...