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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: The Girl Playing Dress Up-Chapter 6

    Hey pineapple! I wanted to review this a couple of days ago, but I had this huge project due and stuff, so I had to hesitantly put it aside. Anyways, ...

    Jun 3, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Mature

    Hey emilyrebecca! First of all, I think you have found a really great concept for this poem. The whole "mature child" thing is kind of messed up. I was really ...

    Jun 2, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy
    Re: Pisces Vs. Aries

    Hey Euphoria! First of all, I have to say that this poem has a really intriguing title. As someone who used to be completely obsessed with zodiac signs and stuff, ...

    Jun 1, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor
    Re: Project Oblivious - Ch 4

    Hey Book_Dragon! I saw this in the Green Room a couple of days ago, and I wanted to read it but then I had work, and then I forgot about ...

    May 27, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: people that meant a little more

    Hey Plume! If this isn't in the literary spotlight already, it totally should be! This is an amazing poem! I like the format of the poem, how you end each ...

    May 17, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Literature
    Re: The Death of a God

    This is kind of random, but are you by any chance a Percy Jackson fan? Because the way you describe the death of a god kind of reminds me of ...

    May 8, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: I tipped my cup of coffee

    First of all, lemme just say I love your formatting! It looks SOO COOL!! I've heard of poets that paint pictures with their words, but your poem is like a ...

    May 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: The Eraser

    Hey Haraya! You've done it again! You've written a beautiful masterpiece out of a topic that nobody would even consider. And, you've done an awesome job! Way to go! You've ...

    May 4, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Rhapsody of the Late Monsoon

    Hey Haraya! First of all, lemme just say, you have this beautiful way with words, which is just so poetical!! I know that sounds kind of dumb, 'cause like, this ...

    May 3, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: Project Oblivious - Ch 3

    Hey! I've been waiting for so looong for this, and when I saw this in the Green Room, I started to grin from ear to ear like an idiot. (: ...

    May 2, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: growing older each day

    Hey chikara! First of all, I really liked the comparison of love and coffee. The entire poem flows smoothly like a river, gently bringing about images in the readers' mind ...

    May 1, 2021

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Lokiverse

    Hey ThikiNiki! Wow! This is is a great poem. It really made me laugh, with its light-hearted tone. I especially loved this line: Not superior to a single thing. Simply ...

    May 1, 2021

  • Poetry » Other, Realistic
    Re: To the one who stole my heart

    Hey! First of all, lemme just say you have done an awesome job with this poem. You have a captivating title, that is both intriguing and touching. I liked how ...

    Apr 30, 2021

  • Poetry » Other, Narrative
    Re: Blueberry Bush

    Hey! Your author's note is waaaay too modest! This poem was awesome! There is no awfulness at all! I really liked how you passed on a sweet message through your ...

    Apr 27, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: an introduction to origami & heartbreak

    Hey chikara! First of all, wow! I really like how you relate origami to heartbreak. The title is great. It is intriguing, and touching. This line is beautiful: origami unfolding ...

    Apr 25, 2021

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