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Lokiverse

by ShpidderMon


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A league of those who find Loki superior.

End of sentence.

Not superior to a single thing.

Simply superior.

The Lokiverse, a place where the trickster god's illusory duplicates materialize into true human beings.

Join us.


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Mon May 10, 2021 3:42 pm
Phillauthet wrote a review...



This one is so serious in its phrasing, and that's the funniest part of it. Just wanted to ask, who's 'us'?

I love the finality when you say 'End of sentence.' and 'Simply superior.' (I know I'm just ruminating on what the others commented but that's what I feel, bear with me.)

Also, by any chance, have you read Magnus Chase?

This was funny and great, looking forward to seeing more of your work!




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Sat May 01, 2021 6:08 am
NivedaJames22 wrote a review...



Hey ThikiNiki!

Wow! This is is a great poem. It really made me laugh, with its light-hearted tone.

I especially loved this line:

Not superior to a single thing.

Simply superior.



It's like "Loki is THE BEST. No need for further clarification." XD

On the whole, it was a wonderful, humorous poem, and it also serves as advertisement for the Lokiverse. Can't wait to read more of your work.

Keep writing.




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Thanks!



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Y'all be like, "My name is Legion, for we are many."





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