Lokiverse

by ShpidderMon

Published April 8, 2021

E - Everyone

In Avery Phoenix

Join us.

A league of those who find Loki superior.

End of sentence.

Not superior to a single thing.

Simply superior.

The Lokiverse, a place where the trickster god's illusory duplicates materialize into true human beings.

Join us.

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Phillauthet
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Phillauthet wrote a review Review · May 10, 2021

This one is so serious in its phrasing, and that's the funniest part of it. Just wanted to ask, who's 'us'?

I love the finality when you say 'End of sentence.' and 'Simply superior.' (I know I'm just ruminating on what the others commented but that's what I feel, bear with me.)

Also, by any chance, have you read Magnus Chase?

This was funny and great, looking forward to seeing more of your work!

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NivedaJames22
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NivedaJames22 wrote a review Review · May 1, 2021

Hey ThikiNiki!

Wow! This is is a great poem. It really made me laugh, with its light-hearted tone.

I especially loved this line:

Not superior to a single thing.

Simply superior.



It's like "Loki is THE BEST. No need for further clarification." XD

On the whole, it was a wonderful, humorous poem, and it also serves as advertisement for the Lokiverse. Can't wait to read more of your work.

Keep writing.

TrulyDeviousAngel commented Comment · Apr 8, 2021

This is just yes

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MaybeAndrew
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MaybeAndrew commented Comment · Apr 8, 2021

Y'all be like, "My name is Legion, for we are many."



"I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then."
— Lewis Carroll