Niraco

You're very welcome dude :)

I understand more, hahha. You're very welcome.

I don't know if I maybe explained in the prologue but 'Youths' is what children are called in this society. Sorry if that wasn't clear. Thank you for your review ...

To me this poem is in fact rather cute and I like the childish aspect of it. I don't really understand why you had the title as 'Ode to the ...

Oh, I understand a lot more.

You're very welcome my-dear :D

You're very welcome mi-dear :D

It's easily fixed. ^.^

I've never written a poem before so I didn't put much emotion into but still thought it was a good idea. Thank you for your review :D

That's okay dude!

Thanks for pointing my mistakes out. I'll go back and change them when I have the time. I'll also try and slow things down. Thanks again for your reviews they're ...

Thanks a lot for your review. Regarding the Pets I'll go back and edit so hopfully it'll be more more clearer. Thanks once again for your kind words :)

Glad I could help :) I'll be sure to check out the next chapter

Take all the time you need. :)

Thank you so much for your review. I went back and took on your suggestions. Like I said to TheMessagener I never seem to put apostrophes in the right places ...