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Re: To Fall or Rise: Chapter 3
Hey there. Let's just jump right into the review! Merin sat with her legs crossed on her hard cot in the dark room one of the sisters had led her ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Silent Lover
The usage of the word lover I felt was very effective within this poem. The subject matter you used has been done numerous times before but you turned it into ...
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Re: Jesture.
Like LittleCaroleen said there were very odd points within this poem where rhyme took places but there didn't seem to be a rhyming scheme. Other than that I did enjoy ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Runaways Chapter 3
I feel rather terrible with myself for being so harsh to your stories and this isn't helping. Why is this so short? I believe this it just an accident and ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Runaways Chapter 2
Hello there, I left you another review on your first chapter of this. I left a rather harsh review and I must say, this review will pretty much be the ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Runaways Chapt. 1
I must be 100% honest when I am review. Saying that I didn't really like this chapter. For reasons I will now explain. First however, I do like the chemistry ...
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Re: I Wrote a Poem
Hello there! I personally really like this poem, even if it was horribly written (which it isn't) I we would still like the point of it. A poem about a ...
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Re: The Traveler
I loved the mystical feeling sounding this poem. For me, I feel a very deep connection with this poem. The subject matter was very close to my heart. My heart ...
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Re: Prologue of The USA Abattoir
Hello there. The first thing I noticed about the appearance of this prologue was the lack of paragraphs, at first glance it looks rather boring, and would put a lot ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Friends
I love this poem and could feel the emotion illuminating from it. We aren't even friends--not anymore. It wasn't on purpose, I know. These two lines tugged at my heart ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: How We Were
This short story was very well written and like Skye said the usage of 'like' at times did not really fit. It was very suspenseful and actually scared be at ...
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Re: Different Sides of the Same Story
This poem was filled with so much emotion that it made me chock up a little. I saw that this was in fact based on one your friends. As first ...
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Re: Telling the Truth
Like Noelle and Crystal said your title does not match the poem. For a long time I just sat and wondered why you choose this title. I came up with ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: I Am the Reader, You Are the Book
Hello there. When I first looked at this poem I was drawn to it, the way it is structured makes it look well thought out and just generally attractive. Good ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Between The Angel and The Devil - Chapter Three
In my previous reviews of your work I praised your main character. The way the story is told though your MC is funny, descriptive and - at times - incredibly ...
Oct 27, 2013
