Ninlil

What you wrote here was a very deep and emotional short story. I really enjoyed reading it. Your language and figurative language is well developed and I like your grammatical ...

Hej! Reading this was highly enjoyable. Indeed I could hardly concentrate on anything but the story. Yet after a second time of scanning it through I can point out following ...

Nice third chapter. It withholds new levels of complexions and twists that were satisfying. The opening was overall good. Really neat how you jumped to the future, revealing that we ...

Happy to have discovered the first chapter after reading your prologue. Again I have to say your language is excellent. The flow is smooth and your descriptions rewarding. I can ...

This Prolog is a nice blend of darkness and a crisp, subtle kind of humor. I like the way the main focus was on an evil character and that his ...

This prologue is certainly an eye catcher. The reader is immediately flung into an odd, unexplained situation, which makes you crave more. It is also not too long and it ...

First of all, I think you did a great job. It is obvious, that you put allot of effort into this. Your ideas are refreshing and compelling Your plot is ...