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Wow, this is hilarious! I love it! Nike :)

great-you should edit the parts the readers said above me- i hate repeating. loved it! Nike :)

great-just more description!!! really great! Nike :)

Nice! I agree with Embee 100%. You do have mny errors but your story is chatchy! I loved it! I think this story has good potential keep on writing. Nike ...

thanks, I'll watch out for those commas! I got the avatar after playing a game on Disney Channel from the Phineas and Ferb games.

why isnt anybody commenting? you read it; yes i like that but i would REALLY wanna know what you think! Nike :) P.S.- Thanks.

i lost interest. I dont wanna be the bad guy here or anything but i hate the 16-year-old pregnancy story, it happened before. I agree with all the writers above ...

This is amazing! I loved it so much! I'm gonna sing this instead! Nike :)

again, i have to say it was amazing! just edit the parts that the writers above me said because i dont wanna have to repeat. I loved it! Nike :)

I loved this! the description is perfect, everything was amazing! If it were a movie i would try to get the MC role. Nike :)

I agree with The New Hero. You should do what he says. I love this, really i want more! Nike :) keep typing!

I love this! I can't beleive you write so fast and so amazingly! Continue, please! Nike :)

My pick is "Ghost Writer," I love the book! But the movie misses alot! That book is so amazing. I love Harry Potter too but I didn't read the books ...

I loved this, keep on writing more!!!!! i can'r wait to read more of this!

i like this! it's very interesting! just split it into parts it'll be better, k?