User avatar

Nike

Nike!

  • Short Story » Romantic, Fantasy Re: I love a weeping angel

    I will be honest with you. I thought this was going to be a Doctor Who fanfic or something. I was wrong. This was more than anything I could ever ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Time is Ticking

    Hello! I'm pretty sure this was meant to go into the Storybooks section. I know, a bunch of people said this but I will remind you. Storybooks section. This story ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Back Home

    Hello! Here's the review. Let's start with your main character. He's got a characteristic voice, which is good, it hooks readers. He's not a party person, I'm not either so ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A Toy's Life

    Hey, I'm Nike, here to review. > First off, I'd like to say your story is great. I loved the plot, the idea. It was touching. Here's the editing. "When ...

    Feb 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Uncertainty

    This is Nike, hello. -Review- >The first thing I want to talk about is your story overall. It has a brilliant idea, something anyone can relate to. Your writing flowed ...

    Feb 6, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Why?

    Hello. Here to review. I read this story and thought it was beautiful. The whole idea, wow. Your writing really pulled my attention. Wonderful. With my nit-picks. Well, first off ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: My Bloody Valentine

    Anonymous! I LOVE THIS. May be a bit creepy and very Halloween-ey but, it pulled me in. Your opening sentence hooked me in. Even though this was short, it still ...

    Jan 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: My Winter Love

    Ello. I read romantic stories, regularly actually 'cause I write many. They are easy to write, I guess, because everyone feels it. But no one's knows what it actually is ...

    Jan 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Lawful Evil

    Damn was this piece mind-blowing... oops, shouldn't have said that. But I really mean it. It was good. The description is excellent. But what I didn't like was when you ...

    Jan 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Supernatural Re: Face On The Wall

    First off, this is alright. Your idea is okay, I mean... it's hard to write from a child's point of view. You managed. When you said 'Awesome!' you didn't show ...

    Jan 21, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: To be a Star (18+)

    Hey. It's Nike here with a review for you. In this story I don't have really much to review. You wrote it nicely. No spelling or grammar mistakes. The plot ...

    Jan 21, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Lovely Hate

    Hello. I'm Nike, here to review!! First of: I feel like this could be longer. And more descriptive. It felt very loose and you switched topics easily, which is not ...

    Jan 19, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, Science Fiction Re: Breakfast in the year 4001

    Hellooooo. I'm Nike. My review: I loved this story. It was brilliant. The whole idea to create something like this, wow. I like that you pushed us into the future. ...

    Jan 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Running

    Hello. I'm Nike. Nice to meet you. Here's my review. I liked what you have written. It speaks to me, you know? It's very nice. I love your first paragraph ...

    Jan 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: That's not mine is it?

    Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Amazing. Nike here. I read. I'm here to review but it looks like I have absolutely NOTHING to review. It was that good. I loved this ...

    Jan 10, 2013


When a body moves, it's the most revealing thing. Dance for me a minute, and I'll tell you who you are.
— Mikhail Baryshnikov