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Re: I love a weeping angel
I will be honest with you. I thought this was going to be a Doctor Who fanfic or something. I was wrong. This was more than anything I could ever ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Time is Ticking
Hello! I'm pretty sure this was meant to go into the Storybooks section. I know, a bunch of people said this but I will remind you. Storybooks section. This story ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Back Home
Hello! Here's the review. Let's start with your main character. He's got a characteristic voice, which is good, it hooks readers. He's not a party person, I'm not either so ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: A Toy's Life
Hey, I'm Nike, here to review. > First off, I'd like to say your story is great. I loved the plot, the idea. It was touching. Here's the editing. "When ...
Feb 6, 2013 -
Re: Uncertainty
This is Nike, hello. -Review- >The first thing I want to talk about is your story overall. It has a brilliant idea, something anyone can relate to. Your writing flowed ...
Feb 6, 2013 -
Re: Why?
Hello. Here to review. I read this story and thought it was beautiful. The whole idea, wow. Your writing really pulled my attention. Wonderful. With my nit-picks. Well, first off ...
Feb 1, 2013 -
Re: My Bloody Valentine
Anonymous! I LOVE THIS. May be a bit creepy and very Halloween-ey but, it pulled me in. Your opening sentence hooked me in. Even though this was short, it still ...
Jan 29, 2013 -
Re: My Winter Love
Ello. I read romantic stories, regularly actually 'cause I write many. They are easy to write, I guess, because everyone feels it. But no one's knows what it actually is ...
Jan 29, 2013 -
Re: Lawful Evil
Damn was this piece mind-blowing... oops, shouldn't have said that. But I really mean it. It was good. The description is excellent. But what I didn't like was when you ...
Jan 29, 2013 -
Re: Face On The Wall
First off, this is alright. Your idea is okay, I mean... it's hard to write from a child's point of view. You managed. When you said 'Awesome!' you didn't show ...
Jan 21, 2013 -
Re: To be a Star (18+)
Hey. It's Nike here with a review for you. In this story I don't have really much to review. You wrote it nicely. No spelling or grammar mistakes. The plot ...
Jan 21, 2013 -
Re: Lovely Hate
Hello. I'm Nike, here to review!! First of: I feel like this could be longer. And more descriptive. It felt very loose and you switched topics easily, which is not ...
Jan 19, 2013 -
Re: Breakfast in the year 4001
Hellooooo. I'm Nike. My review: I loved this story. It was brilliant. The whole idea to create something like this, wow. I like that you pushed us into the future. ...
Jan 11, 2013 -
Re: The Running
Hello. I'm Nike. Nice to meet you. Here's my review. I liked what you have written. It speaks to me, you know? It's very nice. I love your first paragraph ...
Jan 10, 2013 -
Re: That's not mine is it?
Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Amazing. Nike here. I read. I'm here to review but it looks like I have absolutely NOTHING to review. It was that good. I loved this ...
Jan 10, 2013
