Nike

Hi. I read this in a hurry. You should re-read this and edit big time. Sometimes you just made t go too fast and there are no feelings. MORE DESCRIPTION!!!!!! ...

Alright. Since you are new here this will be fun. I liked the piece, it had potential. But you really gotta add description! You got to add it in the ...

Hi! This was amazing. I liked it that you placed the scene in the hospital. I don't know where the romance is, but i think that you will show it ...

Hey Writer! I'm Nike... here to review! First Impression I liked it. Everyone loves the story of a best friend love, like for example: Shows: Ugly Betty, Hannah Montana. Books: ...

Hey kakagirl! First time in Romance... that's great that you decided to try! For your first time this is great! I loved the plot and concept of the story. I ...

I loved it so much! It pulls you in! This is a great piece --but you should edit some more parts like the writers above me mentioned. There needs to ...

Hi! I liked it-- it's a great start to the begining. I can't wait for more! I agree with ace1996. She was right about everything in her review. I hate ...

Hi. This is cute! You should edit the story a bit by re-reading it because you have spelling mistakes-- but Tiffany (the writer above me) pretty much says it all. ...

Hello! Here to review the second part! *pulls out red pen* GET READY! Blue = corrections Red = things I like Teal = nit picks I deleted the parts I ...

I loved this!!!! It wasn't really original because of the whole "I feel for my sister's boyfriend" thing-- and I've read something like that before. But It was original frm ...

Hello... I'm here to review like you requested! So, I don't peek into the Fantasy section on YWS but I'll give it a try. (I didn't even read a whole ...

This is amazing! I love it. The whole 'hopeless romantic' thing is great! You can edit some things by re-reading it and what L5na2 said. Keep Writing! I hope you ...

When I first looked at this I was like WOW! This looks huge! You should split stuff up a little so it could look more appealing... I'll read it again ...

I enjoyed this piece. you were right with the whole description thing- you need to add more of it. The story was cute and enjoyable! You should write another part! ...

hellooo. I got your PM so I'll review it! So, this is a bit confusing. First of all-- you change your tenses from past tense to present. Some of the ...