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Hi wickedwonder! I'm Nike, I'm here to review. If I'm a little harsh, it's just to help you :D Its a journal entry, one of my first. Go gentle-ish, please. ...

Whoa! I love this chapter!!! Keep Writing! Can you inform me when your next chapter is coming? And can you check out my short story: Prom Disaster I'm So happy ...

Hello. The truth is this is cute. It's short and sweet but is there gonna be a second part? Because it seems like it when you read the end. The ...

I'm here, like I said yesterday. The edits will be recognized; stuff that you don't need in strikeout and edits will be under what I quoted. I tried to fix ...

Hello. I'm Nike! Here to review this piece. "I hate this town." I complained looking out the car window at my new home. MayVille was a cute little suburban town ...

Hello. I'm here to review your lovely story! It was warm but breezy What was warm and breezy exactly? as I walked down my driveway. The relief from the sweltering ...

Oh my gosh! This was amazing. I didn't think that I would read it, but I did and it was worth it. I was pulled in by every word! KEEP ...

I liked this! This is an interesting book. But you should add description. I don't know how the MC even looks ike! Maybe when he looked at the mirror you ...

Wow. This is crazy long. You've got to put it into chapters or at least parts! No one will bother reading everything all at once. What I thought of it? ...

hello GiutarGirl. Here to review! To tell you the truth, I loved this! It's so cute! I don't wanna repeat anything so I'll just say I agree with the writers ...

Hi. I'm Nike. I see that you're new here! I hope that you have fun on YWS. Anyway let's get talking about your novel. Hm, *scratches head* this is LONG. ...

Wow. this is great. But it doesn't seem like a short story, it sounds like a novelle. I think that ou should make it a book. This pulled me in! ...

Hello Addawen! All I have to say is: this is amazing. Maybe the end where he got shot you should make it seem like slow motion (my suggeststion thats it). ...

Ok. Hi I'm Nike. I ead this. Its confusing. Really confusing. You sould re-read this and maybe even READ somethin to see how a book should be written. The talkin ...

Hello. I liked it but it was connfusing. It went way to fast. There was a plot but you gotta build it up. I know that you're not writing a ...