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Re: Life’s After-Party
Hey there. I'm Nike, here to review. The reason I picked this story was the short description. I live in Chicago, so I was interested in what you wrote about ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Empathy
I LOVED THIS SO MUCH Oh my Goodness. Hi, I'm Nike. And I love your story. I love the fact that you used dialogue for most of the story, and ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Don't Forget Our Past
Hey there. It's me, Nike. I love short stories, so I'm here to review yours. You told us to review it to pieces, but not to be too harsh? I'll ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: "Happy Birthday, Fred."
Helloooooo fellow PotterHead! When I saw the title, I knew right away it was a Harry Potter fan fiction. And I was excited. It was brilliant. You are a good ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: The Night The Dark Lord Fell
Hey, Iggy! I'm here to review. :) Reading your piece, I was amazed at how well it's written, I felt like it was actually from the book. Ha-ha. You're a ...
Apr 1, 2014 -
Re: l o v e l e s s - i. [her]
Hey there! Happy Review Day! I'm Nike, here to review. I've been holding off reading this because I read it's poetry... and I'm bad at Poetry. I don't write it, ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Dare
Hello! Happy Review Day! I'm Nike. First off, your story is pretty interesting. It catches the readers' attention. I want to know what's going on, why is it going on, ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Meh, Whatever
Hello! I'm Nike, here to review! Happy Review Day! The title is really driving me nuts. What is it supposed to imply? The sun has not risen yet, rays of ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Renzel's World: Section 1
Hello there! I caught your story in the Green Room. Here I am to review. This piece is extremely long... it would have been nice if you split it into ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: [Insert Creative Title Here]
Hello! The title brought me here, he-he. Sometimes I write a 'don't know a title' title, so I thought that's what you did. I was far from right. And that ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: You
Hey there. I'm here to review! What she knows about you. It starts with the warm heat from her body, transcending off of yours. She can feel your presence, but ...
Mar 19, 2014 -
Re: The Photographer
Hello. I'm here to review. First off, I'd like to say, wow. I was not expecting that ending. I thought it'd be that the MC would go to Veronica and ...
Mar 19, 2014 -
Re: Star Crossed Lives
Hi. THIS WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ IN SO LONG. You don't understand, I haven't read a good one a a long while. I loved this so much. ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: Late night/ really early morning writing :)
Hello! You said to help, so I'll help. Spelling/grammar mistakes will be in bold . Since there are no separations in your story, I will make some to make it ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: Art From the Lips
Hey! Happy Review Day! Walking into the small apartment building, Scarlett craned her neck to the side to look up the winding dark wood stairs that went up to multiple ...
Feb 23, 2014
