Nightshade21

Hi Nightshade here to do a short review on your amazing poem :) First off I love this!!!! You have nailed exactly what loniness is in crearive amazing ways! I ...

Hi night here for a review. I'm going to keep this review shirt cayse I'm tired. Only thing I saw wrong was that just don't infor dump, combine the info ...

Wow.... just wow.... in a few paragraphs you caught your readers attention and never let go. you gave us insight on this world you crated and how special the main ...

Hi night again here to review. Now im not going to lie at first I was confused them I had to mentally slap myself because pixies tiny. once the slap ...

HOLY COW! this was awesome! I loved this story growing up and you just made it that much better! Now onto the review. I'm not going over the nickpicks because ...

Hi, for thing first since its a quick change, on the description there's a typo you wrote they instead of there. now on to the review. First off I loved ...

Hi! Nightshade here to review. I only have a few cons so im just going to start with those if that's okay. I disagree with the person below, these grammar ...

Hi night here to review! this is going to be a short review because I loved your essay. I also liked how you gave the background info before starting to ...

Hi there Nightshade here to review. I'm sorry if I asked something or say something that you explained before im just jumping in. Now onto the review! As for the ...

I really liked this the only problem I saw was you kinda lost m during the beginning, it was sorta like a ramble and my brain started to skim, That ...

Hi cinder!!! I haven't read before this yet, so if I get something wrong I apologize if you explained this before. But after reading this I need to go back ...

Hi Night here to review your work, I haven't read the chapter before so Im just jumping into this so I apologize If I say something you explained before. Now ...

HOLY COW! There is no way you created this in five minutes. Though I would love to know how she got into this situation you were great in putting so ...

For someone who doesn't do poetry your really good at it. Your message is what everyone feels but can't describe it exactly in words, you did which was great. I ...

I don't seem its right either way murder is murder but I do think you're really awesome that you made this tribute to the 12. I really liked how you ...