Nightshade

I really liked the tone of this piece. It's very different from the style that you usually write with. It actually reminded me of the story-driven autobiographies that were popular ...

First off, you're a very solid writer. You have a strong vocabulary and your sentence structure is excellent. This has all been said by most of the other reviewers though, ...

This poem was very ok for me. I found a lot of this relatable, but it didn't have a lot of imagery or interesting perspective. There were glimmers of powerful ...

Really nice work. I read this through a few times out loud and it flows beautifully and is very rich in emotion. That said, there were some parts of it ...

First off, you need to work on your grammar and formatting. Try shortening up your lines and splitting your poem into stanzas. This will make it easier for the reader ...

I liked the feeling of this poem. You do a good job of putting the reader into the situation that you're portraying. I was grateful for the line "Secretly everyone ...

I really enjoyed this. The way you use language is truly your own and incredibly interesting. The clarity it retains through all of its complexity is amazing. But I've given ...

This poem has a really interesting, unique style. The stanzas of very short lines also give it a really cool rhythm. I also really liked the idea of the two ...

I liked this a lot. You have a really interesting way of laying out your thoughts. My only criticism is that the last line of the first stanza is very ...

I really liked your voice and the story you told in this poem. It was a lot of fun to read. That said, the rhyming nearly ruined it for me. ...

First I'll go over spelling, grammar and wording. A dark shadow haunts you. It knows your adress. (address) It's been watching you undress. (I would get rid of the contraction ...

Overall, I liked this poem. Your imagery was very effective, and as Ben said, it made me feel like I was in the poem. Your rhyming did a good job ...

This was a really interesting piece. The way it played out was almost stream-of-consciousness, but it was far more poetic than any SOC piece I've ever seen. The combination of ...

I enjoyed this poem a lot. It has an interesting flow and does a great job of being both poetic and meaningful. I typically don't like rhyming in poetry, but ...

I really liked this poem. It has a lot of very interesting ideas and its structure and style are very unique. I especially liked how you opened it. The tone ...