Nightlyowl

Again... sorry, I didn't mean to offend...

I'm sorry

I'm sorry about the font! I really don't know how to fix it though... I hit download and that's the font the site picked... so sorry...:/

Yes much better! ^.^

I did have the stanzas separated, but it didn't post that way, and you are supposed to capitalize the first word of every line in poetry.

I'M SORRY! >.

Thanks! I'll play with that, thanks for your review!

Thanks for the review! I'm sorry it sounded so negative and undefeatable, but from what inspired me to write this, it is undefeatable ... >.< And thanks! I'll play with ...

Ahhhh that makes sense! And you should totally write more poetry! I love your poems! Creative writing is fun, I do that too. ^.^ I'll have to read some of ...

You don't know Beowulf?!? It's not a who, it's a book! A classic! It's the first adventure/hero story ever and it's the first poem-story thing! You should read it, it's ...

Oh my god! I hate when that happens, I had a poem that messed up the spacing too, and no matter how many times I edited it, it wouldn't fix!

Oh they do they do! Thanks for the suggestions! Yes, she knows about things because she's a major part of the war so to speak. More answers on that and ...

The questions you have are explained more in later chapters that are finished, and waiting to be posted. But I'll see if I can slip some more info in here ...

Again, I had it in stanzas, it just didn't post that way. I don't know why and I keep trying to fix it but alas nothing changes. >.< Thanks though! ...