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Nightlyowl

  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Like an eagle

    I really like this. It tells a story and gives a lesson. I loved it it was great and I hope to see more of your stuff. Sorry this wasn't ...

    Sep 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I just...

    This was a very interesting poem, I don't know if its just me being tired or if it was true, but it seems like it was written just because. I ...

    Sep 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: for all good things must end

    I loved this poem very much; it flowed well and sounded great. All the emotions that carried throughout the poem was wonderful and consistent, it made sense and didn't jump ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Blood Red Skies

    Wow I really loved this. It was unquicly written in a way I hadn't seen before. I really liked it especially the song at the end. I loved how you ...

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The truth about me

    Wow I really loved this. It was moving and I just wnated to stand up and become and activist. To see someone, who is able to write that they're proud ...

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Set me Free

    Hey, I reallyed loved this poem I can definatly relate to this. Its relatable and easy to read. Your wording rolls right off the tongue, and was short and sweet. ...

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Impossible

    Hi Owl here, and I'll review your poem. So this piece was good I loved the concept of it, unfortunately there were some errors here and there. I like the ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bruises

    This was very touching, very moving. It told a story that was heart breaking and hopeful. To think that though she was hurt badly, broken into submission, she's ready to ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Please don't cry

    This was beautiful and I loved it. I read it over several times I loved it so much. It was moving and I was able to understand your point without ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Singularity

    Wow this was amazing, it was perfectly done and the stanzas were even and didn't seemed forced. I really liked it and could understand what it said. It makes me ...

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Lullaby

    Wow... simply amazing. I really loved this and could see myself singing this to myself at night or to a child. It was very dark and would most likely make ...

    Oct 21, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Will You, Won't You, Watch?

    I really enjoyed this, it was deep and moving and not incredibly long. The only error I could find was this: ...with bare palms cold against and bony knees that ...

    Oct 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Journey

    I agree with Dante in parts. I think that some parts of the poem were abit confusing and need a little clarity. Though I don't think that they were too ...

    Oct 21, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: It's not easy to say.

    I really liked this it was touching and cliché but completely true because lots of times you think that in real life and that's why it seems cliché, because you ...

    Oct 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Little Boy With Wild Imagination

    I really liked this but I agree, you should reread your work. Lighting the way for the little trolls. I still really liked this, it was cute and it made ...

    Oct 21, 2011


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