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Hey Persy, Like all of your other works, this too has left me speechless. Absolutely inspiring. Very emotive and beautiful word choice. There's nothing I can say I would change, ...

I was in the 'short story' section and came upon your work. Curious. Is it a poem, lyrics or narrative? Whatever it is, I liked it. It is a moving ...

Hey S.S. Rose, Your title caught me. It's all very imaginative and curiously different. I like it. The first two lines display so much about the meticulous nature of your ...

Hey again Puckerman96, Before I start the review, I have to say that this is a interesting piece. I enjoyed reading it. How We Mock Nature ‘Life is like a ...

Hey Skins, The name was what hooked me in. I didn't even bother looking at genre or length. You had me at the name! Your first paragraph is fantastic. It's ...

Hey Demoness, This was interesting, to say the least. I mean, it was like a stream of consciousness-cross-poetry. The word choice was beautiful, and I really liked that. True, the ...

Hey Redfang18, This was beautiful. You have such a stunning word placement and a really powerful structure. The imagery you create is really indescribable. Magical, really. I adore the line: ...

Hey JackBauerwritesbooks, Well done handling criticism. Hopefully my review will be...um, nicer . So, I loved how you structured your short story. The minuscule chapters were interestingly laid out. I

Hey er334, I won't go into detail as others have done it before me. All I can say is that I agree with Rarity, that yes, you need to proofread ...

Hi DiskElemental, This story was invigorating. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. "He stood outside her cell, they called it an isolation room, but he preferred to call it what it ...

Hey Thatoddkid, This is a beautiful image that you have created - the liveliness of a young boy, in such realistically imaginative terms. I won't go into too much detail, ...

Hey StoryWeaver13, First off, I like your writing style. It is solid and informative, which is different to what I came in expecting. "Neither of us had answers." The entire ...

Hi there, Azileth, Firstly, please put paragraphs in. Or at least separate a few lines. From first view, it just looks like a clump of words, which is a bit ...

Hey EdenArielle, I won't go into too much detail in this review, but first I want to point out, that the font needs to be changed . Maybe that's harsh. ...

Hey ctlvr1, What is with the short-short stories these days? I've come across so many. Yes, your story is short. Very short. I would like to see more, because, to ...