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Re: “The Fog”
This is a truly unique story that reminds me of a movie I watched before, which also featured thick fog and monsters. However, this story is even bolder, and the ...
Mar 16 -
Re: The World That Let Us Go
Hello, friend. I think this is a fantastic science fiction novel. The story has a good beginning, starting with Sergei's dissatisfaction with "monotonous work", accurately portraying the image of a ...
Mar 16 -
Re: The Apple Never Falls Far from the Tree- Villanelle
Hello friend, Thank you for sharing your poem. I think you have written a very interesting and creative poem, using the metaphor of an apple and a tree to express ...
Dec 31, 2023 -
Re: Love
Hello friend, Your poem explores the theme of love and its negative effects on your self-esteem and well-being. You express your frustration and pain of being in love with someone ...
Dec 31, 2023 -
Re: Your First Pain
Hiya Ellie, I noticed a significant difference in tone between this poem and the first one. This poem is a tender and touching message of comfort and courage for a ...
Dec 24, 2023 -
Re: Perfect In Every Way
Hiya Ellie, I like your poem. It is a beautiful expression of love and care for a baby. You uses simple but powerful words to convey a deep affection and ...
Dec 24, 2023 -
Re: Who Is Going To Save Rapunzel?
Hiya AmayaStatham, I really like some of your expressions in this story. for example: Then you had two types of people who answered: You had the angry kind, ‘It’s 6 ...
Dec 22, 2023 -
Re: *****
Hiya RavenAkuma, When I first finished reading your story, I wanted to write something, but at that time, I had just joined YWS and was still learning how to write ...
Dec 21, 2023
