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Hey, Strange. Thanks for the review. Originally, thus was just a convo that I made up in my head and I had no intention of writing it down, but I ...

No problem; I enjoyed writing it!

LOL, I love this! It's awesome and I agree with Remington38--ME WANTS CHOCOLATE NOW. I always want chocolate, though, so yeah... :D. The twist at the end was surprising and ...

Hey, Divergent! What's up? I'd like to say that I really enjoyed this poem. I, too, feel the same way about public displays of emotion other than happiness. Personally, I ...

Thank you so much for this review! I'm so happy you liked my work so much; I've been in a sort of writing slump, and this encourages me to start ...

Oh, alright! That clears things up. At first, I thought it was Mowzan who was Zoltar's adoptive father. So now I know why Scorpus sacrificed himself. OK. No problem, and ...

Oh, thank you so much, Eros. It really means a lot to me that you like my writing so much. I definitely will keep writing, thank you.

Wow, thank you so much for your review. It's very helpful and I'm glad you pointed out the "nearer" situation--I hadn't noticed that. I'm planning on lengthening the story over ...

Thank you so much for this review! It's really helpful. I'm thinking of lengthening this and describing their relationship over the years, so this was just to test the idea--I'm ...

lol, at least I tried. :) Anyway, I'll definitely read the other chapters!

Wow, I really like this. I'm assuming they're lyrics to a song; I can imagine them set to rock music. Good job!