NerdBurga

This is a very deep poem. Obviously full of emotion, you obviously am speaking from true inspiration. That's what I love about poetry. The inspiration. You captured my attention with ...

Hey, nice poem. It certainly brings up plenty of sympathy, and many people can empathise with you. Try to keep a structure about the poem. Turn the lines into even ...

Hey, nice poem. It's a nice change from all the poems about a guy breaking a girl's heart :P I understood what you were talking about, good descriptions. Don't forget ...

I like your idea for the poem. It's quite different to all the other ones I've read lately, like a breath of fresh air. Unfortunately I have some issues that ...

Ok, well I liked your emotion in this, very heartfelt. Unfortunately, that was about all I got from it. The paragraphs need to have a consistant technique, instead of having ...

Hello again! :) Well in the last poem of yours I reviewed I said you could have made it a bit longer. Try not to be mad at me now, ...

Wow. WOW. I am so envious of you. This was a great poem. I loved it. Usually I don't approve of short poems because you can never seem to get ...

Good poem! I liked the idea, most of the flow worked, the rythym went well. But me being the critic I am, I just have a few things to point ...

I really liked your poem. It had a lot of certainty in it, you obviously felt strongly about what you were saying and knew exactly how to say it. Your ...

Well I liked the idea of your poem, but feel it wasn't presented very well. The confusion in the poem was displayed, but I felt like you were just saying ...

I think you have some good ideas here, but they are hidden because of your technique of writing, which I hope to help you with :) I walk through the ...

Can I just start by saying Sannah is an awesome name :P So I liked this poem, it touched me because you talk about how you don't feel this person ...

Wow, this was a really interesting passage to read. I was completely sucked from the real world to the world you had created. I also really liked the creative names ...

This was a bitter sweet poem. On the one hand, it showed your care and your deep personal thoughts for this girl. On the other hand, it was of course ...

I really really really enjoyed reading this. A whole lot of the poems (mine included) are often quite depressing, so this was a fun and refreshing read. I think there ...