Nenchjre

I noticed that you're fairly young. It's good to start off writing at a young age when there are more opportunities. So good job. Okay now onto my review. I ...

This somewhat resonates with me since I'm a depressed teen who had his fifth existential crisis. All formalities aside, I like how the text is in cursive. It's as if ...

Well... this is pretty good. I'm not sure if you're talking from experience or if this is purely fictional, but all of this sound...sincere? I'm not sure if that word ...

To me, it is as if the protagonist is trying to bury the past and present despite having constant reminders/triggers of the pain. I don't want to come off as ...

Wow... I've seen people utilize different fonts and sizes to get their message across, but this was powerful. It seems to me that all of the words associated with your ...

Heh, I've got daddy issues too, so I kind of know where you're coming from. Although all situations are different. This is just my own personal interpretation of the poem, ...

You have a very artistic way of establishing a scene. Your usage of incorporating the environment and weather being perceived by the senses really help paint a mental image. The ...

Ah, is this a sequel to the Lord of the Rings? I've never really been a big fan of the franchise, but I can understand where you're coming from. The ...

The outlook of this poem is very positive. If it we me, I would've avoided the usage of text language, such as "u" or "ur." Also, the sentence "And life ...

I don't wanna come off as rude or anything, but it sounds as if these words were your own thoughts. As if you write (or type) in a flash of ...

To me, it sounds as if this came from sincere feelings or experience, although it is kind of rude of me to infer anything about you from what I've read. ...

For a newly written and rushed story, this is pretty good. My standards are kind of low, since I've just began writing. The dialogue is kind of hard to follow, ...