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You might consider coming up with a more original title to draw people in. It'd be a shame if you didn't, since this was quite an enjoyable poem! It's interesting ...

You get brownie points for humour: No, we do not still drink from our mothers breast. Couldn't stop laughing there. I didn't even know that stereotype existed, but it'd be ...

DEMETER! Writing again! Woohoo! Long time, no read :D. And I tried Googling maitolaituri but came up with absolute gibberish. I also typed in 'definition of...' and still came up ...

SCIENCE POEMS!!! My gosh, I just finished writing three myself. As someone who loves science and poetry...sir, you have found a good combination for my tastes. :D I'm intrigued by ...

Why the picture? The words speak for themselves; you have no need to explain your source of inspiration. And nor do you need the image to back up the poetry ...

Oh. Wow. First things first - this is going in my list of forever YWS favourites. I knew that it was a winner from the opening lines, from the first ...

Journeys and holidays should make for such intriguing reads, actually, since they describe environments new to the poet or narrator, meaning we all look upon them with wonder and astonishment ...

Hey Eli - The reason why I could not connect with the poem (and, believe me, I did want to) was because it doesn't really cover anything new, or in ...

Hey Lily! It's so good to see you taking people's advice into account and giving the poem a makeover. I have to say, the formatting looks much better now that ...

I'm not sure if anyone else will get it, *waves arms* I get it. And I LOVELOVELOVE it when people write poetry about science. It makes my day, seeing my ...

Maneda read my mind - that's exactly what I was planning to do when you first put this up: decode the poem :D. Fantastico...I love a good bit of mental ...

Sheesh, it's not often I'm so hooked by the idea of a story as this. I had a read of the synopsis of the novel, and I was thinking: wow. ...

Hey Ben! I haven't actually reviewed anything by you before (as far as I can remember), so I have no idea of your current or usual style or anything. But ...

I've read countless 'chapter 1's' and beginnings of short stories (and novels, too, actually) that begin with that tried and tested cliche of the main character waking up and carrying ...

Hey Gabby! (may I call you that? I have a tendency to nickname people :D) I had a read of the first chapter, and then I read the synopsis, and ...