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I find it immensely interesting that I was put off by your title. And for that very reason, I thought: I've GOT to have a look at this, since I ...

Oh yeah! I loved this - and, truth be told, I don't lurk around the lyrics section much, but the title looked kind of interesting (ALWAYS a good thing :D) ...

Finally here to review! There were definitely some interesting images here, and some new ones, and I can see that the poem is based on something deeply emotional and intense. ...

I loved this. Firstly, because of that interesting title, and secondly because you've used a lot of really inventive imagery that seems to dangle nuggets of details in front of ...

You know what? I love it when poems have a FASCINATING title - and this one certainly did. The wind sent you a kiss in shape of a shiver across ...

Firstly, I LOVE it when people write a good opening line. Your opening line was immediately interesting and sweet all at once - it made me curious, but it also ...

Thane - I have no idea what this is doing in the lyrics section. To me, it read like a poem that had been cornered into sentences. Let it run ...

I'd like to mention that the title immediately grabbed my attention, and I was quite curious to see what you'd come up with. However, what annoyed me was the way ...

Hello again! Overall, I've got to say that there was some fascinating imagery in there and a really clear 'dark' theme running throughout. There were some lovely lines: When contrary ...

I found this actually quite cynical and amusing all at once. Kind of like a good blend of sarcasm and wit, I guess. But it was far too repetitive for ...

First off, brilliant title you had there. I saw so many differet metaphors in my mind, just from the title!!! And it's SUCH a cute idea. However, the first stanza ...

I will be honest with you - this piece did very little for me. Probably because it's got a very listless feeling - it doesn't really draw us in as ...

Listen to Elinor! I definitely agree this poem needs some more spicing up. I like the idea behind it, since modern poetry can tend to get too nature-oriented even now ...

Hey Attolia! You asked me to come have a look at this, and now I have. Obviously, the first thing that struck me is that it was so cute and ...

In a way, I strongly dislike the idea that someone who is gifted at so many things is denied love - it annoys me. Possibly because I enjoy doing so ...