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Natalie!!!!

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Shadow (Chapter 1: Party Time?)

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    HIYAAAAAAA YWS MEMEBRRRR!!! OKAY this story is actually REALLY fun because it captures that chaotic “kids thrown into a magical adventure” :3. Kids being thrown 🥹✌️ The second the wizard ...

    May 26, 2026
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Mad Matriarchy - Rise of an Unreal Empire in a parallel Universe in Year 4000 - Part 4 - The 23 Wives of Katrina, Disgusting Deeds

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    Hi again!! Part 4 is honestly INSANE in the most ambitious way possible because it fully commits to turning the Gautam-Kaif dynasty into something that feels bigger than a normal ...

    May 26, 2026
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Mad Matriarchy - Rise of an Unreal Empire in a parallel Universe in Year 4000 - Part 3 - Full Sex and The Catalogue of their Dynasty

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    Hello again!!! Part 3 honestly feels like the moment the story fully transforms from a strange corporate family saga into something closer to mythological dystopia. Compared to Parts 1 and ...

    May 25, 2026
  • Short Story » General, General Re: School assignement I'm quite proud of :)

    HIIII I FINALLY AM BACK AND NOW REVIEW URS CUZ I FORGOT AGAIN :3 This story feels less like a simple school romance and more like a psychological character study, ...

    May 24, 2026
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Little White Lies

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    HIYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA YWS MEMBERRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!! This honestly feels less like a simple school romance and more like a psychological character study, which is what made it so immersive for me.

    May 24, 2026
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Technology Re: The Mad Matriarchy - Rise of an Unreal Empire in a parallel Universe in Year 4000 - Part 1

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    HIIIII AGAIN YWS MEMEBERRRR :3 I didn’t realize I accidentally read Part 2 first :( so going back and reading Part 1 honestly made the entire Gautam-Kaif universe feel even ...

    May 24, 2026
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Mad Matriarchy - Rise of an Unreal Empire in a parallel Universe in Year 4000 - Part 2 - Family Expansion and Full Sex/Pregnancy Circus

    HIYA YWS MEMBERRRRRRR :D I am genuinely transfixed by the sheer scale and commitment of this entire project because it honestly feels less like reading a traditional story and more ...

    May 24, 2026
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: dumb little stupid little dum-dum

    HIYA YWS NEW MEMBER!!! I really love how this poem uses the “stupid vampire” idea in a way that feels both sarcastic and genuinely sad at the same time!!! At ...

    May 11, 2026
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: $|!c!ng

    HAI HAI YWS MEMBER!!!!!!!!! I am actually OBSESSED with how stylistically cool this poem is. The symbols and distorted lettering make the whole thing feel glitchy... fractured... and emotionally raw ...

    May 11, 2026
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: sink up to the surface

    HAI HAI YWS MEMBER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! : I am actually transfixed by this entire poem because it feels less like reading words and more like getting pulled underwater into someone else’s grief ...

    May 9, 2026
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Dylan’s got some demons

    HAI HAI FELLOW CREEPERFEVERDREAMS AGAIN!!! I am actually ENCHANTED by this entire story because it feels less like reading a normal supernatural novel and more like wandering through some liminal ...

    May 9, 2026
  • Poetry » General, General Re: strategy is for wolves

    HELOOOOOOO YWS MEMBERRRRRRRR!!!!! I am actually spellbound by this entire poem! :O! Looking at these lines makes the whole piece feel so much more intense; it is like I was ...

    May 8, 2026
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Disconnected-early draft

    HAI HAI YWS MEMBER!!!!!!! I am actually transfixed by this opening! :O! It is like I was right there on the flickering platforms with you! I am genuinely electrified by ...

    May 7, 2026
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: melancholy...

    HEYAAA YWS MEMBERRRRRRRR!!!!!!! I am actually transfixed by this poem because it is just so relatable! :o! Looking at all these stanzas together makes the grief feel so much more ...

    May 7, 2026
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Magic Shop

    HAI HAI FELLOW NEW YWS MEMEBERRR!!!!!! You have been picked from the green room for a review YAHOOOO!!! Looking at all these magical stanzas together makes the whole poem feel ...

    May 6, 2026


"I never expected that I should be a queen so soon."
— Alice's Adventures in Wonderland