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  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: What is Beautiful?

    Hey, thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Just one thing, 'favorite' is the American way of spelling the word, 'favourite' is the english way of spelling the word ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Cords

    Thanks for the review, whilst I wouldn't say that the guy is sweet, and don't want him to be portrayed as sweet, I can see how you would see it ...

    Apr 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: a mole dream

    Ohhh, yay! I got it right!

    Apr 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Cords

    Thanks for your review. I understand what you mean about the relationship. I actually wrote this for a friend who was experiencing something similar with this boy she had been ...

    Apr 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Fire

    This is really good. Unfortunately it is uber late where I am and my eyes are glazing over, so I will review this after some much needed sleep. But it ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I fell in love with a boy in five inch heels

    I have one thing to say - Thank you

    Apr 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: I'll make Writers out of you

    Genius, I absolutely loved it!

    Mar 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If I Could

    Ohhh, ok. At first I was confused, and then I got it. I did have a comma there, but it must have gotten deleted when I was trying to format ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If I Could

    Thank you for your review. I think formatting has to do with the fact that I'm on a tablet, so when I get the chance to correct it on a ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If I Could

    Thanks! I will fix that right away.

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Lust

    Ok, this is fantastic. Man, you are so good. Can you start mentoring me? Mind you I haven't been doing much mentoring lately. Ooops. So, this is great and I ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Come Along, Pond

    No, probs! I'm always happy to help a fellow whovian out :) I look forward to seeing your other work and what you manage to do with this one. :)

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: The Man Who Regrets

    Hey, I don't have time to review this now, but I will later. It is very good!:)

    Dec 17, 2013
  • Other » Other, Literature Re: The Box Exercise

    That makes perfect sense now. Thanks! :)

    Dec 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No Traces

    Beautiful as always. You create an air of mystery and beauty throughout this whole poem. The inclusion of the seasons is really nice. How it goes from spring to winter, ...

    Dec 15, 2013


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