Nargles

Hey, This is a good poem filled with a lots of different emotions. It is a bit hard to read though because of the lack of punctuation. It just drags ...

Hello, I think this is a nice piece and that you captivated dance perfectly. However in saying that you should focus on putting comma's and fullstops in as they help ...

Hey it's me. It is a good poem and really interesting. It was sad but i felt as if it could have been a lot sadder and a lot more ...

Hey, this is a nice interesting poem! The only thing i can think of is that it is to short! Maybe add a few more lines just to tie it ...

Hey I'm here to review your poem. So it was good. you captivated what loneliness meant nicely and in an interesting way. Your style is interesting and different. One thing ...

Hi, Okay first things first, make sure that you edit it and go through any mistakes such as spelling, capitalisation and grammar, it simply makes the reading easier. Now that ...

i really enjoyed, i found it very interesting and was eager to find out what was to happen next. I would really like to know more about grimm's past and ...